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增强语句表现力的方法介绍

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增强语句表现力的方法介绍来自句子2018年最新推荐。  一、避免使用语意弱的be动词。
  1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:
  weak: the trees are bare. the grass is brown. the landscape seems drab. revision:the brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape.
  or: the landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green.
  2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如:
  1) weak: the team members are good players.
  revision: the team members play well.
  2) weak: one workers plan is the elimination of tardiness.
  revision: one workers plan eliminates tardiness.
  3、在以here或there开头的句子中,把be动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如:
  1) weak: there is no opportunity for promotion.
  revision: no opportunity for promotion exists.
  2) weak: here are the books you ordered.
  revision: the books you ordered have arrived.
      二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了。例如:
  1、poor: my supervisor went past my desk.
  better: my supervisor sauntered past my desk.
  2、poor: she is a careful shopper.
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